This is good! I guess the dog tags look a little funny, but the detail in his armor/suit is amazing and it all sort of pops out well for a pencile drawing. Also like how you did the assault rifle slung around his shoulder. Nice job!
Thank you for the comment! Yeah i didn't like the dogtags as well but i just drew them really quickly and paid little attention to their proportionality. I just drew this on see how good a trooper i can do in any pose i desire, but yeah maybe if i drew it on cartridge paper the results would be better (this is on filter paper).
I actually wanted to draw him holding a dead chicken, but that would take longer and i had stuff to do.